Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @zacorriejones.6747048, We appreciate you sharing 'mixdown' with us! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We think a great step to take would be to try one of our Masterclasses to help perfect your rapping skillset. We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Zacorrie Jones

2 years ago

riding round town in da city my niggas in the back and we getting lity she my girl ill lick on the titi test me again its gone get wicky standing on the block wit dem choppas if a nigga act out of line we gone rock em matter of a fact imma just rock em lets just top em im cooking yo ahh with sum oil imma just let yo ahh boil ill stump u in yo spine coil thats crazzy cause i gotta homeboy name joil