Loss
land from the ashes i been lost gotta win the game at any cost diamonds on my chain dripping frost IN MY OWN LANE IMMA BOSS FUCK IF U FEELING LIL OFF I CAN GET TOP FROM DRAW ALWAYS ON TOP NEVA FALL AND MY LONG COCK GOTTA CRAWL
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Hi @tjcaldwell.6741654! Welcome to our feedback of 'Loss'! 💥 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
land from the ashes i been lost gotta win the game at any cost diamonds on my chain dripping frost IN MY OWN LANE IMMA BOSS FUCK IF U FEELING LIL OFF I CAN GET TOP FROM DRAW ALWAYS ON TOP NEVA FALL AND MY LONG COCK GOTTA CRAWL
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