Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @tristanalan.6740014! Welcome to our feedback of 'SIREN (15:30:04)'! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! See if you can clean up the recording quality, it's not helping the track. Thanks for the track, we enjoyed listening! Keep 'em comin' All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Tristan Alan

3 years ago

Everybody hated till I made it remember get curved by the bitches on the daily now I’m throwing money at they mf faces I been running around the city like you boy gone crazy .. yeah .. call me retarded or call me a monster cuz either is true and I’m coming for you I put all of that shit on my chest haters shoot shots but I got a vest I’ll carry this city on my fucking shoulders the weight isn’t heavy if I’m at my best so just give me a minute no I don’t rest I just need focus I battled depression my strongest opponent and I finally beat so I’m feeling stronger .. what is up now .. if I got some things that I need to say I found the perfect way say why I say then that shit is a wrap that was a double they passed me the mic and the game is in trouble don’t ask me to spit it if you want some mumble .. yeah .. I’m back on you bitches and all of you trash talkers acting like I’m not a good fucking father if I was you I would just pipe down if you want the smoke I got the fire get it right now name me a BD that’s really going harder y’all bitches look thirsty let me get you some water ..yeah.. I remember when they used to call me wanna be .. now I got the money and the music shit I’m everything.. that I wanna be took the long road I ain’t going back now I was on my ass and they wanna know how I put my time my money and all of my effort into the things that I wanted to be now I’m just up and I ain’t coming down I got to much to lose and if I’m being honest I’m really just proud cuz I come from nothing and I made it something I could keep going but you get the point I just wanna bumping with me in your playlist I’m thumbing through pages of lyrics that you haven’t played yet put me on stages on I’m not responsible building is shaking the crowd going crazy I’m in the front row with all of my fans you see me crying .. cuz I finally made it you don’t know long that I have been waiting I had to go through the hell just for me to even get to this heaven it’s really a blessing my prayers to god cuz he really did it and I can’t forget