on my mom

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17 Jan 2022

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The job, So they hear me across The nation Life is hard.

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3 years ago

thank you

3 years ago

Hi there @alombwekashindi.6738098, Here's some feedback on your track 'on my mom', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The job, So they hear me across The nation Life is hard.

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