Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @danieljackson.6736636, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'blood stains', here are our thoughts 💥 Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Daniel Jackson

2 years ago

Sometimes I miss the days of hunger, standin' in the rain 'Member when I didn't have shit to lose and everything to gain Yes, I'm grateful for my blessings, no, I shouldn't complain But what about when I got doubts? I woke up feeling drained That was just so normal in these streets, another youngin' slain My uncle died from a shootout, left murder on my brain Show no mercy, kill 'em all, that's how we was trained Crime scene pictures, can't forget about them blood stains Wounded memories, oh, I'm in need of Novocaine Got me wishin' that these Percs could really numb the pain Catch me, don't got my gun, I guess I'm leavin' with this chain Long live Mike Durb, I won't let them say your name in vein