Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @lordradenholmes.6704704, We're gonna review your track 'homicide'. Let's get it! Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. Good rhyming here, keep it up! ✨ Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

lordraden holmes

2 years ago

Homicide step up to the streets these fools cant compete sprayin lead slapped like undead we runnin game goin down in fame all up in flames goes your pathetic games aint no names only pathetic lames pray to the sky as bullets fly hope not to die tears in your eye watchin you die up in the sky you fly high up to the sky Suicide in the sky natural born killa sprayin lead tell they all dead we go tell we all red cant stop the voices in my head all i hears what you said now im here painted red momma left me for dead all i see is red laying on my rack she turned another sack layin in the pen repent for my sin despite where i been house getting raided as your gettin faded my hearts shaded gettin faded swat kicks the door as you want some more we all hit the floor cant take no more