Discipline
Mr. Premade38 Plays
•16 Jan 2022
Hey, hey I didn’t mean to hurt nobody with the words I rhyme (Yeah) Try to advise the lies but these guys can’t redirect there eyes (Eyes) Maybe next time they’ll evade there eyes before they go bye (Bye) Eyesight gettin hazy with the Pacey can’t keep up with the racy, (Racy) Fallin behind a few steppes Held back by threats and debts and foreign nets (Nets!) Never had no challenge Actin savage with no damage No repercussion for my roughen all I got was a quick discussion (Discussions)
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hi @mr.mr.mr.6733332! Welcome to our feedback of 'Discipline'! 💥 Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect. Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The recording quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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