Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jack.6733241, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Clones (21:48:25)', here are our thoughts 💥 A bit of inspiration could really improve your bars. Think about a story you can tell best. Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. You're slightly off beat. Practice rappin' and recordin' yourself back to tighten up the timing. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Try out a Masterclass if you're looking to hone your rap skills! It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

jack

3 years ago

Hey you next to me please getAway from me I don’t care what you think but now I’m getting angry I have a sudden feeling in my feet that I need to get angry I punch him in the face so he walk away then I punch him in the gut you can say I don’t care what the teacher says send me to the principal office I can care less then I think the worst for him maybe not that different from the other time just tickle him a couple times then I’m out in the hallway all the kids are running away now I have some peaceful time relaxing being angry I don’t care what these people say because I’m the only angry one here OK