Red, White and Hypocrisy
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•13 Jan 2022
My Heart is hardened, its hard to pardon, partly my problems started in kindergarten, an oddity, only a shell of the broken soul Id grow to become, seven years old drug from a home i barely had known, thrown to the roads, lonely and cold, stressed to the bones, depressed, broke and alone. sewn the disconnect, so the disrespect is soley intoned. Drove the shipwreck, to deflect what im told. cause hell is other people, preaching upon their steeples Heathens leeching off of false promises and never keep em if theres an evil it'd be the demons screaming from the pulpit, But the bullshit is permitted Their sins are cleansed cause all they gotta do is repent, But if you challenge what they claim to represent, then, the structure begins to crumble from within and your labeled blasphemous. straight to hell, and you cant say shit cause you asked for this. Its callous and maleficent. To think that god would have allowed for this, without a lesson to give.
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My Heart is hardened, its hard to pardon, partly my problems started in kindergarten, an oddity, only a shell of the broken soul Id grow to become, seven years old drug from a home i barely had known, thrown to the roads, lonely and cold, stressed to the bones, depressed, broke and alone. sewn the disconnect, so the disrespect is soley intoned. Drove the shipwreck, to deflect what im told. cause hell is other people, preaching upon their steeples Heathens leeching off of false promises and never keep em if theres an evil it'd be the demons screaming from the pulpit, But the bullshit is permitted Their sins are cleansed cause all they gotta do is repent, But if you challenge what they claim to represent, then, the structure begins to crumble from within and your labeled blasphemous. straight to hell, and you cant say shit cause you asked for this. Its callous and maleficent. To think that god would have allowed for this, without a lesson to give.
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