Brian Finlayson

Borderline Personality Disorder

Brian Finlayson
Borderline Personality Disorder

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13 Jan 2022

Mind is like an ocean floating away, Getting lost in emotion that's getting harder to face, Spending all these days locked in my brain, Put my message in a bottle just to fill it with rage, Just to chuck it away, now I'm drowning in pain, Lost in a dream and I'm stuck in the rain, I'm lost which path do I take, So fucking paranoid it keeps me awake, So close to death you'll be attending my wake, Lost in my mind, in lost in the maze, Smoking on the ganja, can't see through the haze, Trying to win this race, always end up last place, Looking in the mirror, don't recognizer my face, Got an angel on my shoulder telling me to stay, And a demon on the other tryna take me away, I look at the world, all i see Is fake, I feel to much emotion and its hard to take, But I feel what's real, need more people like me, Stop following the masses and set yourself free, Money doesn't fucking matter to me, We're stuck in a system where everything's staged, A prewritten book, they're just turning the page, You can't fight the system alone, we gotta beat them together, Set yourself free from this stormy weather, Open up your eyes to the true purpose of humanity, LOVE

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3 years ago

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3 years ago

Mind is like an ocean floating away, Getting lost in emotion that's getting harder to face, Spending all these days locked in my brain, Put my message in a bottle just to fill it with rage, Just to chuck it away, now I'm drowning in pain, Lost in a dream and I'm stuck in the rain, I'm lost which path do I take, So fucking paranoid it keeps me awake, So close to death you'll be attending my wake, Lost in my mind, in lost in the maze, Smoking on the ganja, can't see through the haze, Trying to win this race, always end up last place, Looking in the mirror, don't recognizer my face, Got an angel on my shoulder telling me to stay, And a demon on the other tryna take me away, I look at the world, all i see Is fake, I feel to much emotion and its hard to take, But I feel what's real, need more people like me, Stop following the masses and set yourself free, Money doesn't fucking matter to me, We're stuck in a system where everything's staged, A prewritten book, they're just turning the page, You can't fight the system alone, we gotta beat them together, Set yourself free from this stormy weather, Open up your eyes to the true purpose of humanity, LOVE

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