Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @lorenzajackson.6721580, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'many miles'! 💥 Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. 🙌 Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 Try adding, adjusting and removing effects to find what works best for the track. You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lorenza Jackson

2 years ago

Jumped off da porch I was just a youngin I was just on my dick ain't have nun we gon walk down wit sticks and go take it from em' I was just up da road who gon take some from me know I gotta be cautious wont let em burn me hard head looked at like flunky momma I'm sorry fo da pain dat I'm causin iknw da ones dat want me in a coffin sorry no mercy for wat ive become posted daily on da block wit a gun many miles I had walked through this storm all us slidin we been up till da mornin say she love me but dis love just gon cost I can't bare to take anymo losses lotta smoke dat I face bet I off em they gon love me when I'm fake wit myself betta off keep real witcho self bymyself do no askin fo help