Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @erlenemckinley.6716905, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'oppie'! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 This is wavy, love the laid back feel. 🌊 Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Erlene Mckinley

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.