John Smith
John Smith

my baby

my baby

12 Plays

11 Jan 2022

aye listen imma fill you in ever since i lost my nan i felt this pain inside then not to long passes and i find out my kids dead feeling dead inside but then i looked up and you where by my side i want you to know im never letting you slide out my life you make me feel alive

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2 years ago

Hey @johnsmith.6713493, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'my baby', here are our thoughts 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. You really showed your emotions on this, we respect the hell out of that. 💜 We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

aye listen imma fill you in ever since i lost my nan i felt this pain inside then not to long passes and i find out my kids dead feeling dead inside but then i looked up and you where by my side i want you to know im never letting you slide out my life you make me feel alive

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