Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @davidhepburn.6710990, Thank you for sharing 'Patel 1' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Try turn down the explicit language a lil' if you can, too much of it can end up ruining your tracks. Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

TMBeatZ

3 years ago

I got tons of active battles atm please let me know what u think bout them much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance 👌 💯 hope you enjoy 👌

David Hepburn

3 years ago

hello bastard bitches i am Mr Patel I drive a taxi in the city and I do it quite well pay me right and il take you from a to b be a dick il throw you in the mother fucking sea I come from India not been here very long that's why I sing this motha fucking silly stupid song don't mess with me I'm a mother fuka literally We had a good time your mummy and me I'm a gangsta rapper I bet you didn't know fuck with me il fuk your momma shes a fukn hoe every day and every night my phone just goes ring ring Cos ya momma she suck a good ding a ling I told her not to hurry if she wants a free curry don't worry I'm not a very scary man but fuck with me you go missing like madeline mcann that's all I gotta say now bastard bitches