Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jacobdavis.6710050, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'king Jacob'! 💥 We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jacob Davis

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.