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Listen (15:02)

Listen (15:02)

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10 Jan 2022

guess this really is it ... no time to think or speak the truth always reveals itself nothing finds its way to the top quicker than that time ticking like a watch your times expired now its on to the next thats the cold hearted part of this ugly world nothing stopping choices cause your the one who made em righ! take responsability so quit lieing fr sad to say i went against my better judgement i think i allowed myself to change for someone who only wanted to play childish games but hit her wit the step back ..recognize a native far from basic did that came up from the slums a good man but down to catch a body though crossed her broke her down she outta there i grew up paying attention for a reason dont you listen i told you in the begining only wanted to give and recieve real love wtf i lived a responsable life did you forget that ...of course you did! i aint even trippin its only been me ended up in the system doesnt mean im a dummy look around you aint shit funny i grew up in the streets witnessed alot of hate to love to the fakesst all way down to the realest in the flesh and seen the baddest of bitches fucked many and still kept it pimpin...educated native had to spit the verse you will remember cause the feeling will always be your heart being torn from your chest ๐Ÿ’” broken beyond repair nobody wants to be hurt or played everyday doesnt matter pulling shit like this looking all suspicious then trting to trick me into thinking it was you and me...fuck no any man would do the same shit question everything if i lt seems your bitch is out there creeping around ..most likely she creepin trying to run game see i already peeped it ..did always believed our word was our bond hard to go against but this time no saint but got a brain only thing i gain is wisdom ya see to die is gain if you dont see that then we aint the same hate to say it but you drifted off now im lost cause your gone im far from a saint but i tried to be there for my family but they fell apart ..quick to run there mouth or turn there back oh dont forget that sense of entitlement to your things anyways

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2 years ago

Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

2 years ago

Hi @savagesuave89! Welcome to our feedback of 'Listen (15:02)'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. ๐ŸŽง The lyrics are fire, nicely done! ๐Ÿ™Œ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. ๐ŸŒ  This beat choice is great for you! ๐ŸŽผ Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ŸคŸ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐Ÿ™Œ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

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