Severa Superba

3 years ago

Thank you so much for the feedback. I will make those minor adjustments and also post more tracks up soon

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @umguqvwxx1.6703827! Welcome to our feedback of 'TheBeginning'! 💥 The beat is drowning out the vocals a little, try turning the vocals up! Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall! Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! 🤟 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Severa Superba

3 years ago

Some multisyllabic lines #femalerapper #femalemc #lyricist