One More
Victormos4various again oo its getting hard to love you you broke my heart you broke my mustle when you came into my heart I love you ran away with all my pride my hustle I knew it's was gonna like this at first looking like you came in peace I made you talk to my friends and all my gees and now you turned them to my enemies can you give me one more chance can you can you gimme one more chance ร4 you getting tougher problem getting bigger life is getting bitter you are getting chipper don't wanna let you go... my babysitter they call me ripper that I'm a scammer last time you laughing at grammer now when the time passed two weeks after I'm getting richer you coming closer am sorry babe don't love any longer I know you love me you call me pappy call me teddy babe am sorry taught about all the things you've done to me you broke my heart ,turned my friends against me telling me stories committed adulteries said bad things against me you don't even love me living to annoy me telling me sorry life ain't sweet please can you live me
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Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @variouz4, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'One More '! ๐ฅ Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! โจ Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. ๐ถ Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. ๐ผ This track really makes the listener feel something. ๐ The talent here is unquestionable, keep it up! ๐ฅ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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