New Dawn
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•05 Jan 2022
if it's on ,imma move on,like a new dawn/yea' kill my own pawn,yeah imma rook ,a crook,a crevice a blessing,wrestling with my thoughts infesting,you ingest it,readers digestive, digest it ,a new collective,directive,I inspect it,I respect it I neglected,then perfected,I protect it,I collected,protected,introspected,I been elected...serve em up ,too turnt up,bottles up,heads up 7-up! yours fucc tours,I'm demure so transverse, kicc tha curse,imma see the hurse,house of horse, call me a nurse,drop ya purse,what is worse, as I disperse,u defer,lyrics pure,my gift my cure I concur,whirlybird,whirlwind stomping curbs so absurd dirty bird,non spurred,eyes blurred, so interred,eyes lured tour burned,I preferred,flipped you the bird,you interred,as you preferred, have not you heard,I'm a third of the,iceberg,u conferred, it does occured this lot I stirred,plot I stirred,you transferred now ur allure..body perfect every curve,as I swerve,another left turn,feel the burn,u gone learn ur turn. is mine read the sign floating in the seine cast out swine,smell the pine, braid the twine,child of the divine,clutch vines, u behind and benign,best to resign,foul as brine,taste this wine it's all mine,you malign I design,built a shrine,yea I'm fine,drop a line,u assigned,got no spine,what is zine? i affine,undefined I refined,golden tickloud as crickets,who's a witness i got down to busgot my riches fucked all u bitches,all my richness,feel my sickness,illness,is my finesse,stillness all you eyewitness,in dimness,from the distance,u cant prevent this...
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Hey @jaredcochran.6046, We're gonna review your track 'New Dawn'. Let's get it! Headphones would be great to help improve the quality of your releases. 🎧 Feelin' the bars here, we like it! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Try improving your recording quality if you can. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
if it's on ,imma move on,like a new dawn/yea' kill my own pawn,yeah imma rook ,a crook,a crevice a blessing,wrestling with my thoughts infesting,you ingest it,readers digestive, digest it ,a new collective,directive,I inspect it,I respect it I neglected,then perfected,I protect it,I collected,protected,introspected,I been elected...serve em up ,too turnt up,bottles up,heads up 7-up! yours fucc tours,I'm demure so transverse, kicc tha curse,imma see the hurse,house of horse, call me a nurse,drop ya purse,what is worse, as I disperse,u defer,lyrics pure,my gift my cure I concur,whirlybird,whirlwind stomping curbs so absurd dirty bird,non spurred,eyes blurred, so interred,eyes lured tour burned,I preferred,flipped you the bird,you interred,as you preferred, have not you heard,I'm a third of the,iceberg,u conferred, it does occured this lot I stirred,plot I stirred,you transferred now ur allure..body perfect every curve,as I swerve,another left turn,feel the burn,u gone learn ur turn. is mine read the sign floating in the seine cast out swine,smell the pine, braid the twine,child of the divine,clutch vines, u behind and benign,best to resign,foul as brine,taste this wine it's all mine,you malign I design,built a shrine,yea I'm fine,drop a line,u assigned,got no spine,what is zine? i affine,undefined I refined,golden tickloud as crickets,who's a witness i got down to busgot my riches fucked all u bitches,all my richness,feel my sickness,illness,is my finesse,stillness all you eyewitness,in dimness,from the distance,u cant prevent this...
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