Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @ericadalton, We're gonna review your track 'America'. Let's get it! Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Improve your flow by listening to your favourite artists and paying attention to the flow patterns they use! You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Try our Masterclass feature, to help progress your sound! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Erica Dalton

3 years ago

morning America my name is Erica I love to rap and sing I don't wait you can't tell me I can't change because I want to eat you I want to be I see you you can see I love all you America it's time for me to show you I am Erica I'm 10 years old I don't know how to rap and you don't know I'm so sorry we need to say that but by the way I am on top of the highest mountain ever you'll never see your mother and thank you y'all for listening to my song