5 am attempt 1
Sdripz5am It's 5am right now n I'm thinking of you Why I ain't got a clue Thinking of ways to make you my boo I keep myself distracted by shotting food That's what I gotta do Money moves If I see a mistake I have to remove If you want to chat to man I have to approve Take me to a rave and I'll find my groove It's 5 am so what can I do I don't understand you Why won't you be mine Your so fine with a silver line In fashion Selling food is my passion It's a shame I'm stranded In quilt I feel branded Will you show me your flaws I don't give a shit bout your girl group laws Every time I think about you I feel stabbed I feel like I've been jabbed Bare over and over its lapped I just wanna talk to you A little bout what I'm going through Overthinking till my mood goes blue I knew ide be a mess if you withdrew Didn't know what I dived into Now your not around I don't know what to do Looking through our texts Now that your gone Smoking weed whilst listening to our song I fell in to deep I guess I was wrong For thinking that your the one They say that love is a game How comes it fucked with my brain Reoccurring pain That I can't escape It's 5 am and I'm thinking bout wat we could've became You taught me a lesson so I changed See cute girls but all I wanna do is play Like a lost puppy though I wish it didn't end that way I wanted you to stay That's hard to say But bro came in clutch cah I was gonna end my days With codiene and some juice I gave you the world how could you Betray me
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Hey @sdripzz, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on '5 am attempt 1'! 💥 Your bars are good, keep it up! 🙌 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. Great beat choice, really works with the track! The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
good work homie💪🏽💪🏽💪🏽 listen to my newest song #RAPFAMEFINGAZ
first song and it's actually 5 am so I'll do a better attempt tmoz
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