my 1

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02 Jan 2022

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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2 years ago

Hey @gaylenewhiteford, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'my 1'! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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