How it begin
i was just a young nigga 15 or 16, somebody pass the toliet paper finally got shit clean, The hardest nigga on the block, got these niggas teaming up, i showed my face in the place then my opps started leaning up. if he slip and fall we make a mess they gone clean it up, i just fired up that Zaa scotty gone and beam me up, i was in the jets big 45 with that tape on it, tried to put my thug on that wet but he gone snake homie. dem boyz playing the jets? thats a bet i got 8 on it, how you telling me that you the plug wit all this shake on you.
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Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Yo @gooch.! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'How it begin'! ๐ฅ Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. ๐ง Lit bars, keep 'em comin. ๐ Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐ Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! ๐ผ Try adding some of the in-app effect to your next track to take it to a whole new level. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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