Best life
Stacey Lawson~Best life~ ~Hook~ We gonna live it up, we gonna get right we gonna do it big and party all night. We aint gonna stop ,you know we gonna shine havin fun livin our best life. We be gettin high as a kite. How we like to do it livin our best life ~Verse1~ Made so many moves to come up. To get my money right so i have paper to fold up. So many days I had to hold up and wait cuz I made the wrong choice and got locked up. I had so many plans that got fucked up. I had to start all over again and then again bra. No way I would have thought i would suffer so much. I should've seen it coming my life's been so rough. I thought I found a chick that loved me but at the end of the day whats love . We all have an idea in our minds of what it is. But when its all said and done love hurts and thats it. im gonna keep pushing for what i want hoping to find happiness doing it in my best way possible fuck the fuck shit. ~Hook~ ~Verse2~ So many ups and downs on this long hard road. Sometimes I forget the bad days and where ive been cant forget life will remind you though. no matter who you are life is sad sometimes fasho. So I appreciate the good days and try and charish those. I had to overcome alot more then I should I know life will throw you curve balls when you least expect rains snows. My heart has been hurt alot cold world left it froze. im just tryin to do the best I can with I got so im tryin to live my best until dead or old .
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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