Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @sylvenfranklin! Welcome to our feedback of 'lil ryry'! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. We think a great step to take would be to try one of our Masterclasses to help perfect your rapping skillset. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Sylven Franklin

3 years ago

I'm I can't wait to see you hold up with a matter of fact I'm going to try to hold it back try to double back if you try to hold me double double back if you try to hold me on my place straight in the face if you try to hold back I'm going to put straight in the face hold up with me wish you was straight what's good what's playing but I'm going to play cuz I'm going to play ball I'm going to play a dog I'm going to play a dog I'm going to play a dog go on holiday everyday trying to grind to my face trying to grind to ask him office trying to ground you got him my race trying to grind to the enemy whether it's telling me trying to drive to the enemy and then you're sending me that he is my