Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @elimorris.1066! Thanks for sharing 'Make It Happen (16:51)' with us! 💥 Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

ELI morris

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.