I

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31 Dec 2021

hmmm let me think of something real quick you always wondered why i always lied yuh. you were sat there on call while i cried and yet you still wondered why i wanted to die all the time. all of the night's we spent together were the happiest moments of my life. im sorry i never trusted you but now you know why, why i cried all those nights why i always wanted to be alone. since the day i met you i always wanted you to be mine, find it hard to let go but at the same time this chapter just needs to close. close like me as i cant stand this life as i lay here and cry whilst you're out living the best life. go fuck yourself. remember that night (baby be strong) you still wonder fucking why. maybe that'll make that thick skull click but then again you'll just go suck another dick while i sit here and cut my fucking wrists. woah yeah remember the woahs that's my switch but you sat there and mocked it. prick. why dont you go click that hammer back and pull the pin. the pin of the hand grenade that is your heart. please i need to go live another life but maybe you'll see me in the afterlife. i get that i fucked up and im sorry.

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3 years ago

Hey @n4h_, We appreciate you sharing 'I' with us! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! Good choice of beat here! 🎼 We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

hmmm let me think of something real quick you always wondered why i always lied yuh. you were sat there on call while i cried and yet you still wondered why i wanted to die all the time. all of the night's we spent together were the happiest moments of my life. im sorry i never trusted you but now you know why, why i cried all those nights why i always wanted to be alone. since the day i met you i always wanted you to be mine, find it hard to let go but at the same time this chapter just needs to close. close like me as i cant stand this life as i lay here and cry whilst you're out living the best life. go fuck yourself. remember that night (baby be strong) you still wonder fucking why. maybe that'll make that thick skull click but then again you'll just go suck another dick while i sit here and cut my fucking wrists. woah yeah remember the woahs that's my switch but you sat there and mocked it. prick. why dont you go click that hammer back and pull the pin. the pin of the hand grenade that is your heart. please i need to go live another life but maybe you'll see me in the afterlife. i get that i fucked up and im sorry.

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