RiVeR
Ezekiel Songs👑🇬🇧103 Plays
•30 Dec 2021
I fell upon rivers and I know it wasn't Ice cold but it gave me the shivers then my raft was not sold this guy named cory he made the eiber the end of my story good guy said im not tuff but I said bro that aint enough three times my head shook I dont know how long it took I saw a river then I said look and I dont know why im not a rook.Ay what can I say,at least im not one that said no I dont know why I said it though but Im the one who stay low.
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @muzic_temple, We appreciate you sharing 'RiVeR' with us! 💥 Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. 🙌 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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