Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @serenityjohnson.468, We're gonna review your track 'my heart keeps dying'. Let's get it! You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Lil.s

3 years ago

i can try keep trying but my heart keeps dying i dont why but it still hard as still as i try sometimes i feel like it but it feel like dying why does it do that help me help me ooh ooh ooh yo yo come on again yo yo my heart still dies as i try ober and over again ooh ooh ooh ooh yeah yah ooh ok I will come with another person ooh something is wrong ok I will be ok just come on try so i can feel my heart