Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @deniselichtsmithart, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'big gun'! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. You're slightly off beat. Practice rappin' and recordin' yourself back to tighten up the timing. Good choice of beat! 🎼 You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Denise Licht Smithart

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.