Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @spjlddear4! Welcome to our feedback of 'Paradise'! 💥 We like the bars, well written! You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

TMBeatZ

3 years ago

I got new battle please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance to 👌 👍 #TmYourNotThrilling hope you enjoy 👌