Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hey @jalenondatbeat, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'just life'! 💥 Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. You're off beat on this, try and pay a little more attention to when your bars land on the track. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jalenondatbeat

2 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.