Tk Irish
Tk Irish

transformation

transformation

90 Plays

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28 Dec 2021

ash to ash dust2 dust when the smoke clears who's there to trust,the man in my reflection looking kind of n touts, better to burnout then let myself rust,same old ending cuffs or tux,mind spinning last who gives two fucks,200 bucks on the floor holding your guts, cs dim cc%k toheck the score board a mass ave deluxe,dope and tina goofys lust,dented cans gut your crush,in a r pHrhhush gut the mic in a cobra clutch, grab your ace ill UNH zr no 10c0bring out the dutch,me my I'mself and I m too much,you really don't want it, aftcking straight back to Compton,first class delta helta skelta theres noone to help ya,when it rains it pours all outta shelta,left in despair not quite clear your breathing in theโฐ air,blank thoughts with a 1000 yardp stare, repeating in tungs life aint fair,far or near, the truth will appear.when your ready /breathing heavy, slow it right down watch me spit that fetty,rhyme game cut through mechette,i,taliano tu manga spaghetti ,bite more than you can chew, your lite in the loafers and wouldn't stand in my shoe, believe the hype spitting lies that ain't Tru,.mask off disguise surprise it ain't u, look me 8n my eyes get my veiw, lion, tigers and bears on your crew,but this wolf do tricks in no zoo, starting to get bored, praise to the lord,seek your reward.

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2 years ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

2 years ago

What's up @tkirish, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'transformation'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ We think you could turn the voัals down slightly, just a little loud on this! There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Nice flow here - delivery is so important. ๐ŸŽถ You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! ๐Ÿ™ Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! ๐ŸŽผ The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? The effects don't really compliment this track, try to find the right ones for the mood. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. ๐ŸคŸ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Delivery: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Impression: Great ๐ŸŽ‰

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