first song
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•26 Dec 2021
i be out here living life like its a movie fake friends say they ove me that shit dont move me im in something forien gotta push start the whip got my hatas looking stupid swag so off the charts it aint diluted i stay fresh to death im well suited got em tryna copy my style cause these bitches go wild when they see me they panties get wet like they pee peed i be working hard but i make this shit look easy for real though ima put on for my city Beaumont Texas where we got it out the mud gotta watch ya back cause these niggas shooting slugs and they aiming at yo head if you aint coming off that bread tryna put food on the table make one move and shit ill get fatal on ya toe they gone put that label lost alot of people close to me friends turned to enemy giving off bad energy kill em with no sympathy have em in that church house while the chior singing symphonys pictures on shirts turn that boy to a memory now he in the past tense the other nigga looking at life for that offence it dont make no sense how the game ill trap a nigga tryna go from rags to riches they dont see the bigger picture destined to fall for the okeydoke cause you came from nothing you was broke sleeping on tha floor you remember that shit vividly thought come back like you remember me aint tryna go back to how it used to be doing good for a while then them folks at yo door with guns out yelling get dont on the ground you have the right to remain silent treat you like a migrant the system so biased for a negro they look at they kind like a hero but in reality they really nothing nigga they a zero i thought every race was created equal they claim that we evil and whatever we do they claim it aint legal gotta bring this shit to the table for my people instead of causing riots how bout we do this shit it peaceful its time for a change so they dont look at us the same but look at what we became fuck up they whole mind frame stop killing yo own race cause you looking at yoself when look into his eyes its time to realize and idealize
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ok thanks that's much appreciated would you mind giving me a few pointers
Hey @jaydawg.5188, We're gonna review your track 'first song'. Let's get it! Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 We are liking your use of effects on this one. ⭐ Lovin' the casual vibe to this. Feels effortless. 🌊 You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
i be out here living life like its a movie fake friends say they ove me that shit dont move me im in something forien gotta push start the whip got my hatas looking stupid swag so off the charts it aint diluted i stay fresh to death im well suited got em tryna copy my style cause these bitches go wild when they see me they panties get wet like they pee peed i be working hard but i make this shit look easy for real though ima put on for my city Beaumont Texas where we got it out the mud gotta watch ya back cause these niggas shooting slugs and they aiming at yo head if you aint coming off that bread tryna put food on the table make one move and shit ill get fatal on ya toe they gone put that label lost alot of people close to me friends turned to enemy giving off bad energy kill em with no sympathy have em in that church house while the chior singing symphonys pictures on shirts turn that boy to a memory now he in the past tense the other nigga looking at life for that offence it dont make no sense how the game ill trap a nigga tryna go from rags to riches they dont see the bigger picture destined to fall for the okeydoke cause you came from nothing you was broke sleeping on tha floor you remember that shit vividly thought come back like you remember me aint tryna go back to how it used to be doing good for a while then them folks at yo door with guns out yelling get dont on the ground you have the right to remain silent treat you like a migrant the system so biased for a negro they look at they kind like a hero but in reality they really nothing nigga they a zero i thought every race was created equal they claim that we evil and whatever we do they claim it aint legal gotta bring this shit to the table for my people instead of causing riots how bout we do this shit it peaceful its time for a change so they dont look at us the same but look at what we became fuck up they whole mind frame stop killing yo own race cause you looking at yoself when look into his eyes its time to realize and idealize
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