the brawl
Banana47 Plays
•26 Dec 2021
So they say your tall well you know they say the bigger the easier they fall you started this when you asked to brawl so now I'm going to make you crawl now Neil or I will make you peel I feel that ima about to kill hang on a minute I need to chill before your blood starts to spill naw you thought you about to get taught that I can hit you into a nice slot so you better hope you get caught if you pull up on me agian you might get shot you thought that I might have forgot but I promise I will make you rot as I trot on the thought of a man who looked like a knot
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Hey @deezdemons, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'the brawl'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, bring it up a lil' to get the balance perfect. Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
this is my first song ever hope u like it 😁😁
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