Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @malloryvestal, Here's some feedback on your track 'hoe life ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Put some work into your bars, the more original the more you'll stand out. Improve your flow by listening to your favourite artists and paying attention to the flow patterns they use! The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

malloryvestal

3 years ago

mal on da beat! goose on da track! a- i see a dog on da street, yea m- i see a cat, on da weekened but i dont care, cause he sleeping (his name timmy) a- we love sushi everyday, and we hungry for them pieces m- i drive to dunkin, i wanna match latte! extra ice.. yea thas nice. gimme some donuts i want some more nuts (in my mouth) a- ethans are hairy, but thats nice. sometimes he shaves maybe twice (a month!) m- lastly i want to say im a hoe, but thats okay cause i know that someday ima grow to be a bigger hoe?!?