Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jonathan.7193, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Bay-Z (17:30:52)'! 💥 Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. 🎧 Seems like your voice is getting hidden by the beat, put the vocals up for a great mix! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 To improve on your sound, play around with the built in audio effects that Rap Fame offer! It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

jonathan.7193

3 years ago

You know what’s going on you be seeing me cooking when you should be going that that’s your job so do it now sing it baby I now what your talking about the other day I saw you with another boy so so I’m done with you your turn matter fact I saw you with another boy that’s why I move down and said fuck that let me here it i’m just going to stop messing with you you too crazy just like The other girl I have you seen her