one take
Baby Sleep4 Plays
•25 Dec 2021
First things first I can get the burst and if you think that shit ain't enough bitch I can shoot more told my nigga Lock the crib up we don't do loose doors, smoke the nigga like a wood and gave him two sores, The nigga got hit with a k and about two swords, Nigga said that he was balling like "Oh did you score?" Dog fell asleep off the perc right there on dude floor, Nigga tried to tie his arm and asked for two cords. Bitch these ain't a couple rebounds this bitch is two boards, Double crossing niggas and shit bitch I'm the hoop Lord
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Hi there @babysleep614, Here's some feedback on your track 'one take', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Your flow is really getting there! You only missed the beat like once and otherwise you were killing it. This beat is working well for you! 🎼 Your vocals could sound even doper with some special effects. There's lots of great options in the Rap Fame studio we recommend trying. We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
yo my bad that sounded like trash my first ever try on here
I got new battle please comment much respect either way fire lyrics till I die forever only honest votes much respect for giving me a chance to 👌 👍 #TmTillMyTrunksFull hope you enjoy 👌
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