mon

7 Plays

24 Dec 2021

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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3 years ago

Hi there @khalildurley, Here's some feedback on your track 'mon', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 We're struggling to hear your vocals, try put them way up for your next track! Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow. Timing is a difficult task, try ensure that you're on beat with your next track! Great beat choice, really works with the track! We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. 👌 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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