Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @williamcarmona.3017, It's time for us to take a look at 'Love you till the day I die'! 💥 We like the bars, well written! Improve your flow by listening to your favourite artists and paying attention to the flow patterns they use! You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. Nice crisp recording. Sounds great! ✔ We feel the heartbreak in this track, we respect how much you put yourself out there.💜 If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎