Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @swordslasher, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Pick Up The Pen (19:39)'! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! The beat is drowning out your voice, get the vocals cranked waay up so we can hear your bars! Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Sword Slasher

3 years ago

Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.