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3 years ago

Hey @courtneywilliams.5496, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for ' holiday'! 💥 Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. You're slightly off beat. Practice rappin' and recordin' yourself back to tighten up the timing. The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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