Michael Manuel
Michael Manuel

it's not worth it

it's not worth it

27 Plays

21 Dec 2021

Donnie pulled up body covered in black, He didn’t have a plan But had a gat and a mask, Tryna find a quick way To come up with some cash, Toss the piece in the river And clothes in the trash. He walked into the bank He said hands in the air, Put the money in the bag Or I’m killin you dear, Guard tried playing hero Donnie showing no fear, Took a shot at the guard And watched him slump in the chair. He dipped out the back And hopped in the truck, Jumped on the highway He was doing a buck, Weaving in and out of traffic He was pushin his luck, Till he was tossed from the whip From the tree that he struck. He could hear 12 coming He saw the lights in the distance, Shot at the first cruiser with his 9 But he missed it, Cut through a back yard Like a man on a mission, Thinking if only the guard At the bank would’ve listened. Surrounded by the fuzz He knew he made a mistake, He thought of his wife And her smiling face, He reached for the gun That he had in his waist, Saw a flash and woke up Back in front of the bank. see you peace

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2 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

2 years ago

Hey @michaelmanuel.4410, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'it's not worth it ', here are our thoughts 💥 Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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