I'm main man
my name is main man you you can't escape anymore you are the one who is not alive you are just a undead idiot because of you my family died I like this because I'm so cool hahaha yeah I care oh yeah I don't care because I'm the one of the world are created you are created everything in the whole world I don't know I'm going to do and that is all because of you I am the main man you can't escape anymore I am you you are me I don't care though you cannot escape you cannot escape I can though but you can't only I can escape because of you on the computer desk I'm a good dream of Warcraft to death I'll make a dream of a Warcraft pain I make a dream of Warcraft and pain oh yeah she's been sucking my blood every night suck my blood suck my blood sucking my juice every night I got the juice you can't escape I got the juice you can not escape yet oh yeah okay yeah yeah you can't escape me you can't escape you can escape I feel like I'm down here for days just for pizza I'm not going away I'm not going to line up proud of the pay hey boss how it is a mechanical clown with a powerful case locked in the coffin back a slave is it awake for her to get out of her cage just repeat and not get away hey boss how it is a mechanical house out of cage away there's like a bit down every day like a pizza and not the way can't help but you can't escape me yet
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @jude.7444! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'I'm main man'! 💥 Keep grindin' to give your bars some structure. Your flow here needs improvement, try and work on this for your next track. You're off beat on this, try and pay a little more attention to when your bars land on the track. The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. This is a bit dark yo. But fair you're spitting about things you're passionate about which is what hip hop is about! Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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