Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @jrestrada.2488! Welcome to our feedback of 'Then I said..'! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 Try improving your recording quality if you can. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jr Estrada

3 years ago

I see a man bear looking kinda funny so i asked him whats wrong then he said he "he lost his honey" I felt kinda bad so i dropped a couple dollars then he brought his dog a collar then I went down the street to see a man punching the air then i asked him whats wrong then he said "life aint fair" then told him "cmon man life sometimes aint fair but mama will always be there" then he turned around shakeing my hand telling me "thank u man" yuh im on beat i got the heat yuh im beat the heat i went down the the street one time to see a girl talking bout "why u always lying?!" then she continueed to cry and i asked her why then she said "he always lying he always be trying and he be makeing me cry like why?! then i told her "dont worry its gonna be fine"