Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @zachdabeast, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'TRYNA GET FAME'! 💥 Your vocals are real quiet, could you put 'em up? Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent. The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

ZachDaBeast

3 years ago

Tryna get fame Because I feel like a mainmain I’m not playin these games In a Samin Because Almintime be tryin to play me(Ay) Because I feel like imma famin Bout to go home to go flamin Because I got to go be savin Because they gonna be Slain(Uh) I’m not playin these games See what happened I’m the same Cuz goin like ling Like what’s wrong with the saying I be goin sane,sane, Sane Because I’m making my fame Rubbin so hard on gang,gang, Gang Because on my fame Tryna get the same Nigga gonna fane Nigga gonna a sing Gotta get Pinged Gotta get Ringed Gotta get Shane See what happened Call me that bang Because I feel like banged,banged, and Banged With my gun on the gang Gotta keep my gun in my pants And down my shame I’m not playin games Sissy 80hunned on my chain Got a hunned rack on my house(Bling) Gotta 60 chain Got my Nigga on my back I got a hoe on my ring I’m not gonna get these bitches Known what I’m sayin(Ay)