twenty three
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•17 Dec 2021
my friend is like twenty three, he don't know math so he goes up to me, I don't know what to do with the work, so I looked at him and smirked, I go to my house and I saw a tree, I said wow that looks like it's in a story, my brother went out for a swim against the wind.
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Hey @ov3r2kills, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'twenty three'! 💥 The vocals are a tiny bit too quiet, see if you can put them up a bit! Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Fell off just once or twice but otherwise you rode that beat like a pro! Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
my friend is like twenty three, he don't know math so he goes up to me, I don't know what to do with the work, so I looked at him and smirked, I go to my house and I saw a tree, I said wow that looks like it's in a story, my brother went out for a swim against the wind.
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