Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

What's up @gigi46, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'No Losses (23:18:25)'! 💥 Feelin' the bars here, we like it! You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 We feel the heartbreak in this track, we respect how much you put yourself out there.💜 Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track! Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Tcapo

3 years ago

tell me why you ain’t here god tell me why tell me what did I do I know that you love me but what haven’t I went through? I’m hurt im bruising it’s confusing everything that makes me a a person you were there coaching but I feel I’m left in every angle left in the dark where are you I’m can’t hear you I’m waiting for you to tell me my next move. the faith the love it’s burning where did it go it’s turning what did they take from me or did I do something wrong ? didn’t I go through enough when the times get tough for me that’s every other day went into circles doing everything what was expected of me the loss cross what it draws the with drawls cross the applause and not in a good way the red the blue the black the grey what it gave and what it takes the frustrated mind with out substance I have everything I ever had I went through all the scraps scrapes brusies even getting my heart torn apart what do you want from me for you to just love me what is it you want from me to just stay with me what is it you want for me to feel grace I was a disgrace I sacrificed things I can’t get back especially time I know that to you it wasn’t much but from me it was my whole crawling back up again was something that I cannot take with out what the father gave and that’s always absence guess why that was the time when I fucked up twice now everyone is quits no care in the world for a spiritual person making sure we don’t split start again but I guess it happened anyway guess I’ll be waiting everyday for someone to save me from this pain this on going train this highest plane in the brain past the pain past grassed meddows it echos the screams I heard in the beginning of this what a twist dismissed angels save me angels take me to the space that never hates me I love this world but maybe I’m on the wrong side I tried to fight but with no love no cross I am forever lost without god that no longer have a fight left in me