Hate The World
Maggie Grandy8 Plays
•16 Dec 2021
5/31/18 Do I hate the world, or am I just mad at the world? I am mad at the people in it. I think. Maybe I am just mad at the behaviors of some. Are these people the people I would usualy have in my life or be affiliated with? Would I even have any contact with the people I have clumped together and let represent the world's population if I wasn't where I am right here, right now? Is that a question answering a question or is it just another question to add to this, what started out as a single question to ponder is now, a list, is seems. Aren't we only ever where we are, right now? I understand the concept of every action having a consequence, or reaction. Some would say, of equal or greater proportion. Who is the jusde of proportion, would be you, me, the subject, therefore, this portion, about proportion, is redudant and unnessisary. Goes without saying, common sense, obvious. I should think, if anyone is going to this deep of a thought process, they are already there, at that common sensical baseline. Make no mistake, I love where I am. I thnk. I suppose I am not certain about anything right now. With the exception of that. The only thing I am certain about, is not being certain about anything. That is fairly solid. Somewhat of a quagmeyer, however. On the river is where I am, and I love it, the river. The parts that come along with actualy residing on the river, in a boat, a motorboat, are many. Many of which, I feel are less than to be desired. However, with each of these less than desireable aspects that come along with my living on the river in my motorboat, are lessons that I am glad to have learned, and am still learning. Every moment. I have found the idea of living as I do, is quite a romatic misconception. This may partialy play a role in my dissapointment in life, human kind, the river life, due to the pretty picture being only an illusion. Comparable to when you are going to meet santa clause, or your favorite superhero, and when the cloak is lifted, nothing that is revealed, resembles what you hoped. Expected? When is it hope and when is it expectation? I would say, if you have seen santa clause and have been informed of his exsistance, or if you flew next to superman and discused the possibilities of antikryptonyte, to find out you were being duped, and it was all an illusion, it would be hope, or false hope. Expectations fall from what we conjur up in our oun minds, yes based on what we hear, see, have learned, etc, but are not sure of. I hoped the river life was as I have seen and heard of and experienced small doses of. i wanted it to be. There were actions that occured, that had reactions and consequences out of my control. however, my reaction was within my control. I did not have to curl into a ball and suck my thumb or throw a fit, or throw up my hands, when I found out superman didn't exsist. I didn't do all or any of those things, completely, at once, when things went a different direction than I had hoped. I clentched on for the rest of thr ride, and I am not sure if I have much more knuckle strength left to hold on to these reings. I lhave had quite a tight grip and I see that the grib will only require a tighter hold in the times to come. Soon. I will need help with these reigns and I can only hope it will be at the ready when I need it. I will not expect it, and I will react accordingly. I will also not clump human kind in the small judgement I have made based on some small portion of my fellow human that may also be in my position and is mad at the world for their own reasons. Patients with our fellow human. We must have many patients, so we do not hate the world.
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Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback. I've never really shared my writing so this is kind of a big step for me. I'm sure you can hear the hesitancy in my voice. I will work on it. I dig the input and I hope I get more feedback with every step.
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5/31/18 Do I hate the world, or am I just mad at the world? I am mad at the people in it. I think. Maybe I am just mad at the behaviors of some. Are these people the people I would usualy have in my life or be affiliated with? Would I even have any contact with the people I have clumped together and let represent the world's population if I wasn't where I am right here, right now? Is that a question answering a question or is it just another question to add to this, what started out as a single question to ponder is now, a list, is seems. Aren't we only ever where we are, right now? I understand the concept of every action having a consequence, or reaction. Some would say, of equal or greater proportion. Who is the jusde of proportion, would be you, me, the subject, therefore, this portion, about proportion, is redudant and unnessisary. Goes without saying, common sense, obvious. I should think, if anyone is going to this deep of a thought process, they are already there, at that common sensical baseline. Make no mistake, I love where I am. I thnk. I suppose I am not certain about anything right now. With the exception of that. The only thing I am certain about, is not being certain about anything. That is fairly solid. Somewhat of a quagmeyer, however. On the river is where I am, and I love it, the river. The parts that come along with actualy residing on the river, in a boat, a motorboat, are many. Many of which, I feel are less than to be desired. However, with each of these less than desireable aspects that come along with my living on the river in my motorboat, are lessons that I am glad to have learned, and am still learning. Every moment. I have found the idea of living as I do, is quite a romatic misconception. This may partialy play a role in my dissapointment in life, human kind, the river life, due to the pretty picture being only an illusion. Comparable to when you are going to meet santa clause, or your favorite superhero, and when the cloak is lifted, nothing that is revealed, resembles what you hoped. Expected? When is it hope and when is it expectation? I would say, if you have seen santa clause and have been informed of his exsistance, or if you flew next to superman and discused the possibilities of antikryptonyte, to find out you were being duped, and it was all an illusion, it would be hope, or false hope. Expectations fall from what we conjur up in our oun minds, yes based on what we hear, see, have learned, etc, but are not sure of. I hoped the river life was as I have seen and heard of and experienced small doses of. i wanted it to be. There were actions that occured, that had reactions and consequences out of my control. however, my reaction was within my control. I did not have to curl into a ball and suck my thumb or throw a fit, or throw up my hands, when I found out superman didn't exsist. I didn't do all or any of those things, completely, at once, when things went a different direction than I had hoped. I clentched on for the rest of thr ride, and I am not sure if I have much more knuckle strength left to hold on to these reings. I lhave had quite a tight grip and I see that the grib will only require a tighter hold in the times to come. Soon. I will need help with these reigns and I can only hope it will be at the ready when I need it. I will not expect it, and I will react accordingly. I will also not clump human kind in the small judgement I have made based on some small portion of my fellow human that may also be in my position and is mad at the world for their own reasons. Patients with our fellow human. We must have many patients, so we do not hate the world.
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