Fern

22 Plays

16 Dec 2021

Count the days x3 25 more seconds sitting in outer space That drink was laced Now they put me in a case Tear off my face I do race Run through the forest Horror Some manipulated gimmick Tryna lure me in Patch me up get ahold of my sin I deserve it Hiding in the basement You found me in the walls Crept through the vent clenched down on my jaw Now I’m running from the law And my nightmare Gimme something sharp Cut the night air Not fair Death stare Look me in the night scope red dot Get shot Close the blinds Go and try to hide watch how easy I can find you Outside the door I hear a scream and feel nothing It’s just a dream Wake up and realize It’s not easy as it seems Clean up the act Get ahold a jack Get up outta bed it is the downfall of us all A day to remember not a day to forget There’s not much left get ahold a my breath Ahhh Get down on the ground There is blood on the walls phone numbers to call The bodies in the basement the whisper from Paul Hallmark channel screening on the background windows XP getting hacked by the night hound Hack hack hack at the window Insecure and unfamiliar with the venue

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3 years ago

Hey @alexanderbasinger, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Fern'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. The effects have left the track sounding a little off, try playing around with them to strike the right balance. You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Count the days x3 25 more seconds sitting in outer space That drink was laced Now they put me in a case Tear off my face I do race Run through the forest Horror Some manipulated gimmick Tryna lure me in Patch me up get ahold of my sin I deserve it Hiding in the basement You found me in the walls Crept through the vent clenched down on my jaw Now I’m running from the law And my nightmare Gimme something sharp Cut the night air Not fair Death stare Look me in the night scope red dot Get shot Close the blinds Go and try to hide watch how easy I can find you Outside the door I hear a scream and feel nothing It’s just a dream Wake up and realize It’s not easy as it seems Clean up the act Get ahold a jack Get up outta bed it is the downfall of us all A day to remember not a day to forget There’s not much left get ahold a my breath Ahhh Get down on the ground There is blood on the walls phone numbers to call The bodies in the basement the whisper from Paul Hallmark channel screening on the background windows XP getting hacked by the night hound Hack hack hack at the window Insecure and unfamiliar with the venue

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